Selasa, 25 November 2014

Unreached Love


Tugas membuat Narrative Text mata kuliah Bahasa Inggris. Mendapat nilai 85 dengan komentar "too much watching fairy tale? good writing and few errors".

            Once upon time, there was a beautiful young child in Brawijaya Kingdom. Her name is Ayu. She lived with her parents in their small woody lively comfortable cottage. One day there was a terrible war between nations. Ayu’s parents were killed that day. Ayu moved to her cruel relatives. Their name are Uncle Ipal and Auntie Tasya. They treated Ayu like their slave. Eventough Ayu treated badly by her family, she always nice to them.
Ten years later Ayu has grown up into a beautiful lovely charming young lady. Her beautiness has sproud into the universe. Her beautiness is heard by the cruel absolute leader named Esa, President of Slovakia. He damn wanted to take Ayu as her 21st wife. Therefore Esa sent his right arm, nanda the demolisher went to Brawijaya Kingdom. He searched Ayu’s residence. When he found out the residence, he killed her family and left Ayu alone. When he saw Ayu in the face, Nanda the demolisher fell in love with her at the first sight. Instead of brought to Esa the President, Nanda took her in to a remote island and lived happily together.
When Esa the President found out that he was betrayed by Nanda, he was furious.
President asked his troopers to search Ayu and Nanda, then killed both of them. Knowing that, Nanda and Ayu escaped to the other island. The troopers have been searching for two months but they didn’t find them yet. Esa the President wasn’t hopeless, he sent all of the troopers to the universe corner. In Antah Berantah Island, the troopers found out nanda and Ayu. Nanda asked Ayu to escape without him. They were separated by situation and condition. Ayu couldn’t do anything. Nanda promised will come back to her as soon as he could. Ayu has gone with fallen tears in her face.
Ayu went along the forest until meet a cave in the middle of lake. Happily Ayu ran to the cave. Ayu swimmed. Suddenly, land slide happened. Ayu slipped in to the underground of cave. And she was surprised while she was looking around there. It was a palace. There were fairies who worn long white flowing robe. “Hi, who are you? Don’t kill me. don’t kill me.” Ayu scared. “Oh no, beautiful young lady, we will help you from that troopers. You don’t want to be killed, right?” The Queen answered. “You  can save me? Please save me, please….” Ayu requested. “I am The Queen of Water Palace. With my mighty, you can hide in this lake as long as you want, and they won’t find you! Please go there (that lake)!!” The Queen said. Ayu walked to the lake and lost.
At the same time, Nanda was killed by the troopers. But magical thing happened, Nanda’s blood looked sparkling brightly, and for a moment Nanda’s body melted and became stars sowing flies to the sky. Actually Nanda was a star prince. He got a curse to be a demolisher when he was visiting The Earth and now he cameback to his family. After Nanda arrived in his castle, he told that he got a curse when he visited the earth. In that earth too, Nanda has met his soulmate, Ayu. Then Nanda asked his relatives to help him find Ayu. His relatives didn’t agree if nanda married with an earth girl. But, Nanda kept stay on his statement to found and brought Ayu to his castle. In the midnight, Nanda went down to the erath. He searched Ayu to all of nations till world. A week later, Nanda came into a plece, the last time he and Ayu met. “Ayu…Ayu…. Did you know how I miss you?!” Nanda shouted.
Magically, there was a wave in the lake, in front of Nanda’s view. As fast as he could, nanda ran to that lake and how surprised him when he was looking Ayu smiled to him. But Nanda understood that he couldn’t touch Ayu as a fairy of water now. So he just looked Ayu from far away. They were happy have met again although they’ve changed. While they were laughing together, a bow shooting was embedded on Ayu’s chest. President Esa was coming back. Nanda ran to Ayu when Ayu was collapse. Nanda forgot the prohibition to don’t touch water. Nanda hugged Ayu, and a magical moment happened. Both of them were disappeared by golden sparkling sight and water in that lake changed the color to be golden water. From that moment, all citizen belief if a spouse took a bath in that lake would be a true love, true spouse.

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