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Once upon time, there was a
beautiful young child in Brawijaya Kingdom. Her name is Ayu. She lived with her
parents in their small woody lively comfortable cottage. One day there was a
terrible war between nations. Ayu’s parents were killed that day. Ayu moved to
her cruel relatives. Their name are Uncle Ipal and Auntie Tasya. They treated
Ayu like their slave. Eventough Ayu treated badly by her family, she always
nice to them.
Ten years later Ayu has grown up into a beautiful
lovely charming young lady. Her beautiness has sproud into the universe. Her
beautiness is heard by the cruel absolute leader named Esa, President of
Slovakia. He damn wanted to take Ayu as her 21st wife. Therefore Esa
sent his right arm, nanda the demolisher went to Brawijaya Kingdom. He searched
Ayu’s residence. When he found out the residence, he killed her family and left
Ayu alone. When he saw Ayu in the face, Nanda the demolisher fell in love with
her at the first sight. Instead of brought to Esa the President, Nanda took her
in to a remote island and lived happily together.
When Esa the President found out that he was
betrayed by Nanda, he was furious.
President asked his troopers to search Ayu
and Nanda, then killed both of them. Knowing that, Nanda and Ayu escaped to the
other island. The troopers have been searching for two months but they didn’t
find them yet. Esa the President wasn’t hopeless, he sent all of the troopers
to the universe corner. In Antah Berantah Island, the troopers found out nanda
and Ayu. Nanda asked Ayu to escape without him. They were separated by
situation and condition. Ayu couldn’t do anything. Nanda promised will come
back to her as soon as he could. Ayu has gone with fallen tears in her face.
Ayu went along the forest until meet a cave in the
middle of lake. Happily Ayu ran to the cave. Ayu swimmed. Suddenly, land slide
happened. Ayu slipped in to the underground of cave. And she was surprised
while she was looking around there. It was a palace. There were fairies who
worn long white flowing robe. “Hi, who are you? Don’t kill me. don’t kill me.”
Ayu scared. “Oh no, beautiful young lady, we will help you from that troopers.
You don’t want to be killed, right?” The Queen answered. “You can save me? Please save me, please….” Ayu
requested. “I am The Queen of Water Palace. With my mighty, you can hide in
this lake as long as you want, and they won’t find you! Please go there (that
lake)!!” The Queen said. Ayu walked to the lake and lost.
At the same time, Nanda was killed by the troopers.
But magical thing happened, Nanda’s blood looked sparkling brightly, and for a
moment Nanda’s body melted and became stars sowing flies to the sky. Actually
Nanda was a star prince. He got a curse to be a demolisher when he was visiting
The Earth and now he cameback to his family. After Nanda arrived in his castle,
he told that he got a curse when he visited the earth. In that earth too, Nanda
has met his soulmate, Ayu. Then Nanda asked his relatives to help him find Ayu.
His relatives didn’t agree if nanda married with an earth girl. But, Nanda kept
stay on his statement to found and brought Ayu to his castle. In the midnight,
Nanda went down to the erath. He searched Ayu to all of nations till world. A
week later, Nanda came into a plece, the last time he and Ayu met. “Ayu…Ayu….
Did you know how I miss you?!” Nanda shouted.
Magically, there was a wave in the lake, in front of
Nanda’s view. As fast as he could, nanda ran to that lake and how surprised him
when he was looking Ayu smiled to him. But Nanda understood that he couldn’t
touch Ayu as a fairy of water now. So he just looked Ayu from far away. They
were happy have met again although they’ve changed. While they were laughing
together, a bow shooting was embedded on Ayu’s chest. President Esa was coming
back. Nanda ran to Ayu when Ayu was collapse. Nanda forgot the prohibition to
don’t touch water. Nanda hugged Ayu, and a magical moment happened. Both of
them were disappeared by golden sparkling sight and water in that lake changed
the color to be golden water. From that moment, all citizen belief if a spouse
took a bath in that lake would be a true love, true spouse.


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