Selasa, 25 November 2014

Unreached Love


Tugas membuat Narrative Text mata kuliah Bahasa Inggris. Mendapat nilai 85 dengan komentar "too much watching fairy tale? good writing and few errors".

            Once upon time, there was a beautiful young child in Brawijaya Kingdom. Her name is Ayu. She lived with her parents in their small woody lively comfortable cottage. One day there was a terrible war between nations. Ayu’s parents were killed that day. Ayu moved to her cruel relatives. Their name are Uncle Ipal and Auntie Tasya. They treated Ayu like their slave. Eventough Ayu treated badly by her family, she always nice to them.
Ten years later Ayu has grown up into a beautiful lovely charming young lady. Her beautiness has sproud into the universe. Her beautiness is heard by the cruel absolute leader named Esa, President of Slovakia. He damn wanted to take Ayu as her 21st wife. Therefore Esa sent his right arm, nanda the demolisher went to Brawijaya Kingdom. He searched Ayu’s residence. When he found out the residence, he killed her family and left Ayu alone. When he saw Ayu in the face, Nanda the demolisher fell in love with her at the first sight. Instead of brought to Esa the President, Nanda took her in to a remote island and lived happily together.
When Esa the President found out that he was betrayed by Nanda, he was furious.